Declined [VSH/FF2] Add map: Pencil Ravine (1 Viewer)

[Meebas]

Hello all,
I just finished a map I've been working hard on for the past month or so. It's made up of pencils, and it's got some interesting and colorful terrain which I think makes for a great vsh environment. I'm open to feedback if anyone would like to download the map and look around themselves.

Map Download:

VSH Pencil Ravine v1.3 [Team Fortress 2] [Mods]

Take on Hale within the confines of a pencil-y prison... A Team Fortress 2 (TF2) Mod in the Vs. Saxton Hale category, submitted by Meebas

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[UberMedicFully]

Its a cool design, lot of effort but I don't think it would fit in FF2/VSH.
Mainly cause of how tight the most areas are. (judging by the footage haven't tried the map myself)

 

[Aerial]

seems complicated tight big xD

idk if its good for vsh

 

[Macko]

Creative map design. However, it looks complex and a bit tight

 

[Meebas]

I appreciate the feedback! From what I'm getting so far is that the complexity is too intense and that it's difficult to traverse. I'll put some changes to work and see if I can win you guys over

 

[Meebas]

I've made some changes to the map. In short:
- Many improvements made to navigation and smoother walking along surfaces in general
- Two ammo boxes have been upgraded to medium
- Minor adjustments to the landscape in order to open some areas up more and make them less complicated
- All erasers negate fall damage, and there are a few more

Full changes are available on Gamebanana and the Workshop page

 

[Jiji]

Declined due to poll results.